Collaboration #2

Friday nights writing session birthed this song as well. We only had the first verse and chorus and the concept for the bridge. But we had the structure and music mostly complete. Great work by Mark filling out the structure making it work.

As the comment by TT suggests, an MP3 file might be nice. but at this point not possible. On my list of future personal splurges is a micro studio so I can record these things. And I do desperately need to do that. I forget the music rather quickly after i write them. Then they're gone, I rarely revive them after I've forgotten them. I think I have mark talked into buying one for himself, then I'll at least get a couple down in digital.


She stares out the window
thinks of better days
starring out the window
she's miles away.

I don't know what's on her mind
No, i don't know what's on her mind

Little girls have their Princes
and white knights ride their way
So much wasted time,
ogres get in the way.

and she can't talk about it
she wouldn't cut like that
I turn everything upside down,
except her frown.

I don't know what's on her mind
No, I don't know what's on her mind.
I don't know what's on her mind.

How can i talk to her,
what could i say?
should i just pack my bags,
Just go away?

Ogres have dreams too,
they just start with you,
when your dreams come true...
...and you're still with me...

(break)

I don't know what's on her mind
No, I don't know what's on her mind
I don't know whats on her mind


she stares out the window,
thinks of better days...

http://www.reverbnation.com/play_now/song_3246955